The first, second and third prizewinners in each of the three categories will be published in the Spring 2016 issue of Bare Fiction Magazine and, later, on the magazine’s website. The Highly Commended entries will be published online after the launch of the Spring 2016 issue. The prizes will be awarded at our Spring launch reading (venue & date to be confirmed).
Poetry Entries: 827
Flash Fiction Entries: 445
Short Story Entries: 482
Total Entries: 1754
Flash Fiction Entries: 445
Short Story Entries: 482
Total Entries: 1754
All entries were judged anonymously.
Details updated on 15th February 2016.
SHORT STORY CATEGORY
Judge: Paul McVeigh
1st Prize (£500): Krishan Coupland, The Sea in Me (UK)
2nd Prize (£200): Niamh MacCabe, This is Unravel (Republic of Ireland)
3rd Prize (£100): John Wilks, Homo Bile Pen (UK)
Highly Commended x 2 (£25):
Jan Barker, Summer, Nineteen Sixty Four (UK)
KM Elkes, The Day of Joy (UK)
Shortlisted:
Liam Brown, The Finest Cuts (UK)
Laurence Edmondson, Some and Any (Germany)
Elizabeth Lolo, The Conflict Within (UK)
Kate Lockwood Jefford, The World’s Best Creeper (UK)
Jacqueline Everett, How Do I Look? (UK)
Kate Weinberg, Oh, Mookie (US)
Holly Atkinson, The Joy of the Ride (UK)
Laurence Edmondson, Some and Any (Germany)
Elizabeth Lolo, The Conflict Within (UK)
Kate Lockwood Jefford, The World’s Best Creeper (UK)
Jacqueline Everett, How Do I Look? (UK)
Kate Weinberg, Oh, Mookie (US)
Holly Atkinson, The Joy of the Ride (UK)
JUDGE’S REPORT BY PAUL MCVEIGH
Each time I re-read The Sea in Me I liked it more. I liked the ease of the voice. It was a simple story that goes somewhere deeper. In the end there was a longing in the story that reached past my head and into other places.This is Unravel was a powerful, gripping and ambitious story that haunted this reader. On another day, this would have won, (this is the nature of competitions) and I hope this author takes this not as a sad ‘near miss’ but rather a hugely encouraging one. I liked the modernity of Homo Bile Pen, the easy, light but effective style. It made me laugh and feel uncomfortable, a good mix. In The Day of Joy I didn’t know what was going to happen so the story stood out because of its mystery and I liked the mix of a setting that seemed familiar while also being an imagined future. Summer Nineteen Sixty Fourwas another mystery and what I liked most was the imagery and sense of foreboding.
In the end, when I was writing the titles of the winning stories, it came down to what stayed with me and what they had in common was these stories haunted me in some way and the ones that still unsettled moved up the list. Perhaps there’s something in that for us to think about it.
The winner: The Sea in Me (by Krishan Coupland)
2nd place: This is Unravel (by Niamh MacCabe)
3rd place: Homo Bile Pen (by John Wilks)
Highly Commended: Summer, Nineteen Sixty Four (by Jan Barker)
Highly Commended: The Day of Joy (by KM Elkes)
The Finest Cuts (by Liam Brown)
Some and Any (by Laurence Edmondson)
The Conflict Within (by Elizabeth Lolo)
The World’s Best Creeper (by Kate Lockwood Jefford)
How Do I Look? (by Jacqueline Everett)
Oh, Mookie (by Kate Weinberg)
The Joy of the Ride (by Holly Atkinson)
POETRY CATEGORY
Judge: Jo Bell
1st Prize (£500): Astra Bloom, Hot down, cool up. Teaching my sister to dance (UK)
2nd Prize (£200): Anna Lawrence, ‘… he cannot stir a finger, fix his thinking…’ (UK)
3rd Prize (£100): Cheryl Pearson, Mam Tor (UK)
Highly Commended x 2 (£25):
Tom Sastry, A man begins to understand his failure as a husband whilst visiting The Museum of Epiphanies with his soon to be ex-wife (UK)
Pete Maguire, Nu Poetry (UK)
Shortlisted:
Anna Lawrence, Arenophile (UK)
Katherine Stansfield, The Suitcases (UK)
Catherine Edmunds, How to Win at Kings Cross (UK)
Robin Boothroyd, A Smile, A Stain (UK)
Niall Bourke, If A Kitten Is Born In A Banana Box It is Not A Bloody Banana (UK)
Norman Hadley, Old Goat (UK)
Ben Norris, Nightswimming (UK)
Katherine Stansfield, The Suitcases (UK)
Catherine Edmunds, How to Win at Kings Cross (UK)
Robin Boothroyd, A Smile, A Stain (UK)
Niall Bourke, If A Kitten Is Born In A Banana Box It is Not A Bloody Banana (UK)
Norman Hadley, Old Goat (UK)
Ben Norris, Nightswimming (UK)
JUDGE’S REPORT BY JO BELL
Well, goodness gracious me. You were brave, Bare Fictionistas; you did send your best, in its dizzying multiplicity, and I gorged myself on a real variety of skills. My thanks to all who took that small leap of faith and sent me some work to look at. I’ve never felt more strongly what a privilege it is for people to place poems in my hand, and how I should honour each one with a fair reading. It costs a little something to expose yourself to scrutiny in this way, and there were so many kinds of good here. There were strong political poems (a hard thing to do) and subtle poems that changed with re-reading; there were funny, Gothic, obscure and brutal.
There were also several kinds of bad. Please, poets, run a simple spell checker across your poems before you send them for close reading to someone who reads for a living. Syntax counts too: consider for instance the difference between ‘I ran to him’ and ‘I ran into him.’ Other tips? There is a difference between a well-pitched swear word and Tourette’s syndrome. There is a difference between a structured stream-of-consciousness poem, and the unfiltered contents of your mind. Strong rhyme continues to be a blunt tool; exactly what you need for banging home a good nail or a good laugh, but not necessarily for brain surgery or metaphysics.
It took me ages to decide on the final few, and then to decide on the order in which they should be placed. The top five fell into place fairly easily, but their order was difficult until, tellingly, I read them aloud. At that point the subtle play of sound in each one, and the very different energies of the three winners, came out clearly and I was able to sleep again. Well done to all who made it this far. Above all, well done to all of you who entered. You made it as far as the postbox or the SEND button, and can do so again.
The winner: Hot down, cool up. Teaching my sister to dance (by Astra Bloom)
Astra Bloom is an unpublished writer of poetry, short stories and a very long novel! She lives by the sea in Sussex and spends everyday drinking tea and writing in a muddy cold cabin in her garden. Astra has been writing strange things ever since she was given her first dictionary at the age of 6. “Writing brings me joy and sanity and a slightly crooked back.”
2nd place: “….he cannot stir a finger, fix his thinking…” (by Anna Lawrence)
Anna Lawrence is particularly interested in exploring interactions of the magical and the industrial in both poetry and prose. Her first novel, Ruby’s Spoon, is set in a fictional Black Country town with intimations of witches and mermaids (Chatto & Windus, 2010). She lectures in creative writing at Birmingham City University.
3rd place: Mam Tor (by Cheryl Pearson)
Cheryl Pearson lives and writes in the suburbs of Manchester. Her poems have appeared in publications including 14 Magazine, Skylark Review, and all three “Best of Manchester Poets” anthologies (Puppywolf Press). She was a finalist for the Princemere Poetry Prize 2015. She is currently working on her first full-length poetry collection.
Highly Commended: A man begins to understand his failure….. (by Tom Sastry)
Tom Sastry is a bureaucrat and occasional human. He has been writing and performing poems since 2012. Until recently he ran a spoken word night Festival in Bristol.
Highly Commended: Nu Poetry (by Pete Maguire)
Pete Maguire is a short story writer, a poet and the author of the darkly surreal City of a Million Dots. He teaches writing classes in Brighton and is one of the founding members of worldspacegallery a new art gallery concept. His work has been published in Rattle Tales, Aesthetica and Rogue Worlds. He is currently working on his first book of poetry, The Last Gods with Lost Names.
arenophile (by Anna Lawrence)
The same poet who claimed our second prize; so plain in that poem, so playful in this, but with the same dark story underlying both. I happened to know that ‘arenophile’ means ‘lover of sand’ but it could be deduced from the poem. This one is full of rock salt and hints of mermaid, but resists fey imagery and mixes childish excitement with adult attraction.
The suitcases (by Katherine Stansfield)
Katherine Stansfield’s debut collection, Playing House, was published by Seren in 2014. She is also a novelist; The Visitor, published by Parthian, won the 2014 Holyer an Gof Prize for Fiction.
http://katherinestansfield.blogspot.it
http://katherinestansfield.blogspot.it
How to Win at Kings Cross (by Catherine Edmunds)
Catherine Edmunds is a widely published poet and novelist. Her most recent work is the Holocaust-survivor’s biography: ‘My Hidden Mother’. Catherine has twice been nominated for a Pushcart Prize and three times shortlisted for the Bridport. Her poetry has been published in The Frogmore Papers, Butcher’s Dog, and elsewhere.
A Smile, A Stain (by Robin Boothroyd)
Robin Boothroyd was born in Germany and grew up in England. He studied French with English Literature at King’s College London. His poems have been published online at The Bohemyth, DOG-EAR and M58, and in print with Magma. Robin lives in London and works in book production. Robin’s website is thecoldtapsings.com and you can follow him on Twitter @rfboothroyd
Night swimming (by Ben Norris)
Ben Norris is a writer, actor, and former UK All-Stars Poetry Slam Champion. He has performed poetry across the country, from Latitude Festival to the Proms at the Royal Albert Hall, completed commissions for the Southbank Centre and IdeasTap, and had work broadcast several times on BBC Radio 3. His debut pamphlet was published in 2014, and his first Edinburgh Fringe show won the 2015 IdeasTap Underbelly Award.
If a Kitten is Born….. (by Niall Bourke)
Niall is from Kilkenny in Ireland but lives in London. He write both poetry and prose and has been published in a number of journals and magazines including The Galway Review, Southbank Poetry, Three Drops From A Cauldron and Prole. In 2015 he was long listed for The Short Story Competition and shortlisted for The Over The Edge New Writer Of The Year Award and The Costa Short Story Award.
Old Goat (by Norman Hadley)
Norman Hadley is an engineer and mathematician who writes poetry, short fiction, children’s fiction and cycling-related nonfiction to keep all the hemispheres occupied. He’s produced five poetry collections so far and frenetic participation in Jo Bell’s “52” project has generated sufficient material for five more.
www.normanhadley.com
www.normanhadley.com
FLASH FICTION CATEGORY
Judge: Richard Skinner
1st Prize (£500): Eleanor Hooker, The Lesson (Republic of Ireland)
2nd Prize (£200): Maggie Veness, The Whittling of Animals (Australia)
3rd Prize (£100): Peter Justin Newall, The Mill on the River Drewenz (Australia)
Highly Commended x 2 (£25):
David Lea, Hettie (UK)
Mandy Huggins, The Last of Michiko (UK)
Shortlisted:
Samuel Dodson, Snow (UK)
Lisa Davison, Moving On (UK)
Barry McKinley, Home is Where (Republic of Ireland)
João Reis, dawn, city, end (Portugal)
Donald Hiscock, The Budgerigar (UK)
Joseph Stretch, The Following Year (UK)
Chris Connolly, What I’m Saying (Republic of Ireland)
JUDGE’S REPORT BY RICHARD SKINNER
What I was looking for was to be hit right between the eyes from the off and all the way through. I was looking for flash fictions that really surprised me—took me hostage even—and that moved the story on apace. I wanted to read a spicy soupçon, something that felt complete, in its own world rather than what might be a cut-off from a short story, and I was also looking for a real sting in the tail rather than just a punchline. I wanted to see writers really playing with and stretching the flash fiction form, reaching for the unsayable, working hard to leave me wondering and wanting more.
After going through all the entries, there was a core of around 30 that I knew really had something. That group quickly became a shortlist of 12. After reading through this shortlist several times, the top three entries became obvious because I kept on returning to them. Reading through the shortlist was just a confirmation of my initial inklings. From the beginning, all three had struck me immediately—right between the eyes—and none of the other entries could match them.
Taking third prize is Peter Newall’s ‘The Mill on the River Drewenz’. This story, of two men talking and drinking together for two days, has the stench of a dirty barn in an eastern European country. Clinking vodka glasses to toast the cows that have calved and the elder that has flowered, the men could have walked straight out of a Chekhov short story.
In second place is Maggie Veness’ striking story ‘The Whittling of Animals’. Written in a harsh guttural (“Fat policeman kept gorkin at the bruises on ya cheek”) this story of domestic abuse, patricide and police corruption hooks you in straight away and never lets go. The voice is totally authentic and the brutal story doesn’t close conventionally. Bad things continue to happen.
First prize goes to Eleanor Hooker’s wondrous story ‘The Lesson’. Set in Ireland, the creepy school teacher, Brother John, is a superbly-drawn character, complete with cane and equally stinging quips. The characters of his students, O’Shea, Hennigan and Ryan, also shine through. The dialogue is pitch-perfect, displaying a strong sense of tension and teasing humour. This piece doesn’t put a foot wrong in its entirety and is filled with lines that most novelists would kill for—“They measure his mood by the range of his limp”. And all this in a mere 500 words. A triumph.
Eleanor Hooker (1st prize)
For more details: www.eleanorhooker.com
Maggie Veness (2nd prize)
Peter Justin Newall (3rd prize)
David Lea (Highly Commended)
Mandy Huggins (Highly Commended)
Samuel Dodson
Lisa Davison
Barry McKinley
João Reis
Donald Hiscock
Joseph Stretch
Chris Connolly
First published by http://www.barefictionmagazine.co.uk/2016/02/bare-fiction-prize-2015-results/
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